Comments on: 67 MUSTANG • by Dave Macpherson http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Thu, 18 Mar 2010 07:48:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Jim http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/comment-page-1/#comment-17058 Jim Tue, 18 Aug 2009 11:56:09 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/#comment-17058 I got it. The car is real. The girl and everything else around the car is a fantasy. (Most people) don't have dream cars when we're that young. Man, I love a good car story! I missed this on the day it was published and I'm glad I went over it. I got it. The car is real. The girl and everything else around the car is a fantasy. (Most people) don’t have dream cars when we’re that young.

Man, I love a good car story! I missed this on the day it was published and I’m glad I went over it.

]]> By: GMoney http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/comment-page-1/#comment-17057 GMoney Tue, 18 Aug 2009 11:54:52 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/#comment-17057 Not really my thing, and didn't like the talk about the story itself, which made it hard getting into the first paragraph. Good descriptive writing, though, and you certainly got a feel of the car and his love for it. I liked "It had the amenities of a monk’s chamber" Not really my thing, and didn’t like the talk about the story itself, which made it hard getting into the first paragraph.
Good descriptive writing, though, and you certainly got a feel of the car and his love for it. I liked “It had the amenities of a monk’s chamber”

]]> By: Jen http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/comment-page-1/#comment-17052 Jen Mon, 17 Aug 2009 17:53:37 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/#comment-17052 I loved this completly. Excellent nostalgic peice. And I'm not even a car person. I loved this completly. Excellent nostalgic peice. And I’m not even a car person.

]]> By: Margie http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/comment-page-1/#comment-17050 Margie Mon, 17 Aug 2009 16:28:35 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/67-mustang-by-dave-macpherson/#comment-17050 loved it! loved it!

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