Comments on: A GIFT • by Bosley Gravel http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Sat, 20 Mar 2010 18:23:48 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Elin B. http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/comment-page-1/#comment-17034 Elin B. Mon, 17 Aug 2009 00:36:01 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/#comment-17034 Very good work. In a longer story your gift with dialogue would stand out even more. Very good work. In a longer story your gift with dialogue would stand out even more.

]]> By: JohnOBX http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/comment-page-1/#comment-14901 JohnOBX Sun, 17 May 2009 17:12:40 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/#comment-14901 Once again, Cleopatra makes an asp of herself. Enjoyed. Thanks. --John Once again, Cleopatra makes an asp of herself.

Enjoyed. Thanks.

–John

]]> By: gay http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/comment-page-1/#comment-14900 gay Sun, 17 May 2009 16:39:51 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/#comment-14900 Really like this, Bosley. Figured out Cleo fairly soon but I am a fan of all things to do with that period of time. Any one else interested, read Collen McCullogh's Anthony and Cleopatra. Even better, read her whole Masters of Rome series. So Bos, you got it right. Well done. And I think "figs" can be considered singlar when written as a group, cluster, basket, etc. Really like this, Bosley. Figured out Cleo fairly soon but I am a fan of all things to do with that period of time. Any one else interested, read Collen McCullogh’s Anthony and Cleopatra. Even better, read her whole Masters of Rome series. So Bos, you got it right. Well done. And I think “figs” can be considered singlar when written as a group, cluster, basket, etc.

]]> By: Jen http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/comment-page-1/#comment-14899 Jen Sun, 17 May 2009 15:53:16 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-gift-by-bosley-gravel/#comment-14899 I loved this, even without realizing it was about Ckeopatra at first, I love the way you write the dialouge in this, I could hear the characrers voices clearly. I loved this, even without realizing it was about Ckeopatra at first, I love the way you write the dialouge in this, I could hear the characrers voices clearly.

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