Comments on: A TRYST • by Jennifer Berney http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/ Short fiction in your inbox, Daily! Sat, 30 Aug 2008 03:24:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Leif http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/#comment-3492 Leif Fri, 22 Feb 2008 10:11:33 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/#comment-3492 it is inspiring to see that so much can be acomplished so quickly. The simplicity was charming and it felt good. It was fun to chew on and satisfying to swallow. Yum. it is inspiring to see that so much can be acomplished so quickly. The simplicity was charming and it felt good. It was fun to chew on and satisfying to swallow. Yum.

]]> By: KJ http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/#comment-1609 KJ Mon, 19 Nov 2007 03:14:41 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/#comment-1609 This is one of my favorite pieces on the whole site. Thank you so much for submitting. This is one of my favorite pieces on the whole site.

Thank you so much for submitting.

]]> By: Jordan Lapp http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/#comment-757 Jordan Lapp Thu, 04 Oct 2007 15:19:27 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/#comment-757 We loved the writing in this, and the main character felt so pathetic but hopeful. The feelings evoked by this piece were marvelous. We loved the writing in this, and the main character felt so pathetic but hopeful. The feelings evoked by this piece were marvelous.

]]> By: Lyn http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/#comment-744 Lyn Thu, 04 Oct 2007 12:15:34 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-tryst-by-jennifer-berney/#comment-744 Sad indeed. A bit confusing, but I think that reflects the confusion of the characters nicely. Sad indeed. A bit confusing, but I think that reflects the confusion of the characters nicely.

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