Comments on: A WALK IN THE CITIES • by Dave Macpherson http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-walk-in-the-cities-by-dave-macpherson/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Fri, 19 Mar 2010 10:37:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Jaimie http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-walk-in-the-cities-by-dave-macpherson/comment-page-1/#comment-5771 Jaimie Wed, 04 Jun 2008 19:38:41 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=335#comment-5771 his wife is my daughter's library teacher. his wife is my daughter’s library teacher.

]]> By: jennifer walmsley http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-walk-in-the-cities-by-dave-macpherson/comment-page-1/#comment-5648 jennifer walmsley Sun, 01 Jun 2008 07:09:57 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=335#comment-5648 A lovely fable. The ending, I assume, is when the whole world reaches a harmonious existence. Jennifer A lovely fable. The ending, I assume, is when the whole world reaches a harmonious existence.

Jennifer

]]> By: dave macpherson http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-walk-in-the-cities-by-dave-macpherson/comment-page-1/#comment-5605 dave macpherson Fri, 30 May 2008 19:33:04 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=335#comment-5605 Thanks all for the comments. Thanks all for the comments.

]]> By: Hasmita http://www.everydayfiction.com/a-walk-in-the-cities-by-dave-macpherson/comment-page-1/#comment-5551 Hasmita Wed, 28 May 2008 07:00:28 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=335#comment-5551 I enjoyed the writing and the tale till the last bits, which left me wondering what they meant. How did what happen? Did something happen--did the world come to an end? Didn't get this bit. I enjoyed the writing and the tale till the last bits, which left me wondering what they meant. How did what happen? Did something happen–did the world come to an end? Didn’t get this bit.

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