Comments on: ALONE • by Mark Dalligan http://www.everydayfiction.com/alone-by-mark-dalligan/ Short fiction in your inbox, Daily! Sun, 20 Jul 2008 21:25:24 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Mark Dalligan http://www.everydayfiction.com/alone-by-mark-dalligan/#comment-5312 Mark Dalligan Wed, 14 May 2008 19:28:08 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=307#comment-5312 Hi Hasmita, I'm very pleased you liked this and found that 'plain' expression is sometimes more effective when depicting human emotions. Cheers Mark Hi Hasmita,

I’m very pleased you liked this and found that ‘plain’ expression is sometimes more effective when depicting human emotions.

Cheers

Mark

]]> By: Hasmita http://www.everydayfiction.com/alone-by-mark-dalligan/#comment-5301 Hasmita Tue, 13 May 2008 11:32:30 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=307#comment-5301 Sad, beautiful. I like that you've done this with simple pictures and not given in to grand lyrical prose to bring out the loneliness and pain of this man, and the simplicity makes it more real and tangible. Very well done. Sad, beautiful. I like that you’ve done this with simple pictures and not given in to grand lyrical prose to bring out the loneliness and pain of this man, and the simplicity makes it more real and tangible. Very well done.

]]> By: Mark Dalligan http://www.everydayfiction.com/alone-by-mark-dalligan/#comment-5117 Mark Dalligan Mon, 05 May 2008 22:07:51 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=307#comment-5117 Hi Kevin, glad you liked it. Cheers Mark Hi Kevin,

glad you liked it.

Cheers

Mark

]]> By: Kevin Shamel http://www.everydayfiction.com/alone-by-mark-dalligan/#comment-5116 Kevin Shamel Mon, 05 May 2008 21:56:55 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=307#comment-5116 Mark, I somehow missed this before. It's a great story, full of sense and fabric. I like it a lot. Mark,

I somehow missed this before. It’s a great story, full of sense and fabric. I like it a lot.

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