Comments on: ALTERED • by Kaolin Fire

By: Gerard Demayne

Gerard Demayne — Mon, 19 Jan 2009 09:15:37 +0000

Bob – kind of how I felt about it on first reading but it’s one of those higher concept doodads that’s either going to click with you after a number of readings or not. I’d like to see more of this sort of thing on here.

By: TJ

TJ — Sat, 17 Jan 2009 06:16:45 +0000

Great story, Kaolin!

I didn’t see the backwards thing, it was interesting, but I feel it works much better the other way around.

By: Bob

Bob — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 23:00:34 +0000

Maybe it’s just me, but it seemed to be just a lot of dialogue in search of a plot.

By: Kaolin Fire

Kaolin Fire — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 22:43:05 +0000

And Oscar–I don’t know that GUD would, were we to take staff submissions, publish something like this. Best thing is to get a PDF of an older issue cheap.