Comments on: BALL GIRL • by Olivia Berrier http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Thu, 29 Jul 2010 20:25:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Pamela Tyree Griffin http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/comment-page-1/#comment-7256 Pamela Tyree Griffin Mon, 14 Jul 2008 09:47:30 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/#comment-7256 Well done. Best, Pamela Well done.

Best,
Pamela

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]]> By: Susan B. http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/comment-page-1/#comment-1837 Susan B. Sun, 02 Dec 2007 19:20:17 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/#comment-1837 A splendid little story! Hope to see more of your writing, Olivia. A splendid little story! Hope to see more of your writing, Olivia.

]]> By: Rena Sherwood http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/comment-page-1/#comment-1831 Rena Sherwood Sun, 02 Dec 2007 15:50:12 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/#comment-1831 Brilliant! I wish I'd written it. Brilliant! I wish I’d written it.

]]> By: dj barber http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/comment-page-1/#comment-1823 dj barber Sat, 01 Dec 2007 16:17:27 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/ball-girl-by-olivia-berrier/#comment-1823 Nice story and good flow. So many people make sports happen without ever touching the field. A fine acknowledement of those outside the lines, Olivia. Nice story and good flow. So many people make sports happen without ever touching the field. A fine acknowledement of those outside the lines, Olivia.

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