Comments on: BECOMING COTTONTAIL • by Deven D Atkinson

By: Becoming Anthologized « Blogtide Rising

Becoming Anthologized « Blogtide Rising — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 19:28:57 +0000

[...] by Deven Good news about one of my short stories. Every Day Fiction has chosen my story “Becoming Cottontail” to be part of their “Best of Every Day Fiction 2009″ anthology. I am stoked [...]

By: Pamela Tyree Griffin

Pamela Tyree Griffin — Tue, 21 Oct 2008 19:52:10 +0000

Loved this story-what rabbits can or cannot do is no consequence. It’s the author’s world and it doesn;t have to be perfectly or biologically true.

By: Mary

Mary — Thu, 18 Sep 2008 15:26:54 +0000

I really enjoyed this little story. In fact, I may go home and read it to my eight year old daughter. I’m sure she’d love it as well.

Right away, the writer made the reader feel sympathy for the character. Who hasn’t felt alone? I loved the descriptions as well. Very well done.

By: Deven

Deven — Mon, 15 Sep 2008 19:36:39 +0000

Thanks, Robert (and Steve and Celeste and everyone else).

Perhaps the narrator will someday have a precocious kit named Peter…
I’ll make no excuses, though. I struggle with titles. I hope that I get better at selecting them as I improve as a writer. Constructive comments like these only help me to learn.