http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Sat, 20 Mar 2010 13:23:50 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/comment-page-1/#comment-19138 Gaurav G Wed, 04 Nov 2009 09:42:31 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/#comment-19138 Nice little story... I liked the way you managed to get the tension built up in a few words to make for a very believable "snap"! Nice little story… I liked the way you managed to get the tension built up in a few words to make for a very believable “snap”!

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/comment-page-1/#comment-17710 Oonah V Joslin Fri, 11 Sep 2009 10:14:19 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/#comment-17710 Restaurant Rage :) It's like in those roadside places where you get ignored and they serve someone who came in after you or bring you the wrong meal. Definitely worth it! I loved the names of the foods ;) Restaurant Rage It’s like in those roadside places where you get ignored and they serve someone who came in after you or bring you the wrong meal. Definitely worth it! I loved the names of the foods

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/comment-page-1/#comment-17699 Debra Fri, 11 Sep 2009 01:15:31 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/#comment-17699 Odd, but very good. Nice to see another central Floridian writer. Odd, but very good. Nice to see another central Floridian writer.

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/comment-page-1/#comment-17694 Cathryn Thu, 10 Sep 2009 20:13:51 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/breakfast-by-james-hartley/#comment-17694 I also think it deserved a higher rating ... I also think it deserved a higher rating …

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