Comments on: CLOSER TO THE TRUTH • by Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Thu, 29 Jul 2010 20:25:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-9065 Oonah V Joslin Sun, 28 Sep 2008 15:31:11 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-9065 Thank you both. I'm glad you liked the characters. Thank you both. I’m glad you liked the characters.

]]> By: Sylvia http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8745 Sylvia Mon, 15 Sep 2008 22:22:37 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8745 Touching. I wish he'd waited for her answers but then, he's already very patient for a man in a white coat. I like them both. I wonder ... will you be able to tell us her story? Touching. I wish he’d waited for her answers but then, he’s already very patient for a man in a white coat. I like them both. I wonder … will you be able to tell us her story?

]]> By: Rena Sherwood http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8724 Rena Sherwood Mon, 15 Sep 2008 01:54:24 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8724 Thanks, Oonah. Well done, as usual. Thanks, Oonah. Well done, as usual.

]]> By: Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8576 Oonah V Joslin Mon, 08 Sep 2008 14:48:08 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8576 Rumjum, Madeline and Gerard, thank you for reading and for your appreciation. I also had an e-mail from Jason who said Hi Oonah - My comments always end up in EDF's spam filter - so wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story. It was one of the best on EDF in a good long time. Sweet and endearing and touching. Good luck with EDP Jason Thank you Jason too. My blogspot is OONAHVERSE if you want to leave a message there at any point or just browse. Rumjum, Madeline and Gerard, thank you for reading and for your appreciation. I also had an e-mail from Jason who said
Hi Oonah – My comments always end up in EDF’s spam filter – so wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story. It was one of the best on EDF in a good long time. Sweet and endearing and touching.

Good luck with EDP

Jason
Thank you Jason too. My blogspot is OONAHVERSE if you want to leave a message there at any point or just browse.

]]> By: Gerard Demayne http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8570 Gerard Demayne Mon, 08 Sep 2008 09:14:04 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8570 Liked that. Liked that.

]]> By: Madeline Mora-Summonte http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8564 Madeline Mora-Summonte Sun, 07 Sep 2008 19:34:29 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8564 It's told with such a gentle voice that even the darker "surprise" ending comes with tenderness. Great work, Oonah! It’s told with such a gentle voice that even the darker “surprise” ending comes with tenderness. Great work, Oonah!

]]> By: rumjhum http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8558 rumjhum Sun, 07 Sep 2008 16:49:24 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8558 As always, a beautiful and poignant story, and as vivid as a picture. Thanks Oonah! As always, a beautiful and poignant story, and as vivid as a picture. Thanks Oonah!

]]> By: Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8550 Oonah V Joslin Sun, 07 Sep 2008 13:24:23 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8550 Kevin, Mel, Nicholas and Bill, - what can I say to that? You honour me. Thank you very much. Kevin, Mel, Nicholas and Bill, – what can I say to that? You honour me. Thank you very much.

]]> By: Bill West http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8543 Bill West Sun, 07 Sep 2008 09:02:58 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8543 A five star read for sure! Poetic and beautiful. Well done. A five star read for sure!
Poetic and beautiful.
Well done.

]]> By: Nicholas http://www.everydayfiction.com/closer-to-the-truth-by-oonah-v-joslin/comment-page-1/#comment-8538 Nicholas Sun, 07 Sep 2008 01:42:07 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=461#comment-8538 Five star story, Oonah. A memorable story-within-a-story, told with the brevity of a fine poem. Five star story, Oonah. A memorable story-within-a-story, told with the brevity of a fine poem.

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