Comments on: COMING OF AGE • by Rachel Green http://www.everydayfiction.com/coming-of-age-by-rachel-green/ Short fiction in your inbox, Daily! Sat, 30 Aug 2008 03:12:46 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Patricia J. Hale http://www.everydayfiction.com/coming-of-age-by-rachel-green/#comment-5336 Patricia J. Hale Thu, 15 May 2008 21:01:32 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=314#comment-5336 "Liquid red jam seeps out of the hollow gingerbread man" -- loved it. “Liquid red jam seeps out of the hollow gingerbread man” — loved it.

]]> By: Jenn http://www.everydayfiction.com/coming-of-age-by-rachel-green/#comment-5250 Jenn Fri, 09 May 2008 17:04:26 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=314#comment-5250 I watched a woman of about Gran's age do an iaido demonstration a couple of weeks ago. I swear, she flew. I watched a woman of about Gran’s age do an iaido demonstration a couple of weeks ago. I swear, she flew.

]]> By: Scott M. Sandridge http://www.everydayfiction.com/coming-of-age-by-rachel-green/#comment-5249 Scott M. Sandridge Fri, 09 May 2008 16:45:01 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=314#comment-5249 Nice story! Heh. Now that's how you properly teach family values to your young'uns. ;) Nice story!

Heh. Now that’s how you properly teach family values to your young’uns. ;)

]]> By: DJ Barber http://www.everydayfiction.com/coming-of-age-by-rachel-green/#comment-5248 DJ Barber Fri, 09 May 2008 16:43:12 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=314#comment-5248 Good storytelling,Rachel. I liked Gran--"always clean the blade between kills"--she's practical. Good storytelling,Rachel. I liked Gran–”always clean the blade between kills”–she’s practical.

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