Comments on: CONVERSATION, 9:04 PM • by Jennifer Tatroe http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Fri, 19 Mar 2010 15:09:32 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: April’s Table of Contents | Every Day Fiction http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/comment-page-1/#comment-4608 April’s Table of Contents | Every Day Fiction Mon, 14 Apr 2008 14:16:08 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/#comment-4608 [...] Conversation, 9:04 PM [...] [...] Conversation, 9:04 PM [...]

]]> By: jennifer walmsley http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/comment-page-1/#comment-4559 jennifer walmsley Sat, 12 Apr 2008 13:28:33 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/#comment-4559 I enjoyed it. It makes a change reding about a funny monster. I enjoyed it. It makes a change reding about a funny monster.

]]> By: DJ Barber http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/comment-page-1/#comment-4455 DJ Barber Tue, 08 Apr 2008 04:19:31 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/#comment-4455 good and funny good and funny

]]> By: Gay Degani http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/comment-page-1/#comment-4448 Gay Degani Mon, 07 Apr 2008 17:20:26 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/conversation-904-pm-by-jennifer-tatroe/#comment-4448 Loved this: <i>I don’t need your tears all over me, salt water’s bad for the fur. Yeah yeah, I know it works for you humans, gives you the sexy beach hair–but that’s not what it does for us. It’s like chewing gum, man. Nothing but peanut butter gets it out.</i> It drew me right in. I took the narrator as a monster who was on HER side, keeping an eye out for the bad ones. Nice voice, good humor. I like. Loved this:

I don’t need your tears all over me, salt water’s bad for the fur. Yeah yeah, I know it works for you humans, gives you the sexy beach hair–but that’s not what it does for us. It’s like chewing gum, man. Nothing but peanut butter gets it out.

It drew me right in. I took the narrator as a monster who was on HER side, keeping an eye out for the bad ones.

Nice voice, good humor. I like.

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