Comments on: CULTURAL ROOTS • by Rosie Claverton http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Thu, 18 Mar 2010 07:48:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Anne Brooke http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/comment-page-1/#comment-10620 Anne Brooke Wed, 24 Dec 2008 13:49:30 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/#comment-10620 Fabulous. I really loved this one. Axxx Fabulous. I really loved this one.

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]]> By: Hasmita http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/comment-page-1/#comment-10611 Hasmita Wed, 24 Dec 2008 07:17:13 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/#comment-10611 Vivid, sad, understandable. I particularly liked the chilly descriptions and usage (chillies in her veins, lovely). All the best in your writing, Rosie. The Indianness of this surprised me, I didn't see it coming; are you Indian or have a connection to India? Vivid, sad, understandable. I particularly liked the chilly descriptions and usage (chillies in her veins, lovely). All the best in your writing, Rosie. The Indianness of this surprised me, I didn’t see it coming; are you Indian or have a connection to India?

]]> By: km rockwood http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/comment-page-1/#comment-10609 km rockwood Wed, 24 Dec 2008 01:28:39 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/#comment-10609 Vivid images; you use scent effectively. The understated feelings of disappointment, both her own and those of her family, feel very real. Vivid images; you use scent effectively. The understated feelings of disappointment, both her own and those of her family, feel very real.

]]> By: Greta http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/comment-page-1/#comment-10607 Greta Tue, 23 Dec 2008 16:02:58 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/cultural-roots-by-rosie-claverton/#comment-10607 Lovely imagery used with intent. I felt a little lost in the cast of characters, but enjoyed the story nonetheless. Nice job. Lovely imagery used with intent. I felt a little lost in the cast of characters, but enjoyed the story nonetheless. Nice job.

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