Comments on: FIRST SNOW • by Albert E. Schindler http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Thu, 29 Jul 2010 20:25:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: December’s Table of Contents | Every Day Fiction http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2648 December’s Table of Contents | Every Day Fiction Fri, 04 Jan 2008 06:20:31 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2648 [...] First Snow [...] [...] First Snow [...]

]]> By: adana oto kiralama http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2512 adana oto kiralama Sat, 29 Dec 2007 14:05:53 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2512 thanks :) thanks :)

]]> By: gay degani http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2340 gay degani Sun, 23 Dec 2007 18:22:09 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2340 "From my bedroom window view, the fresh dusting of snow atop the rows of round hay bales that still needed hauling in from the field looked like frosted “Mini Wheats”, ready to be scooped up and placed in my breakfast bowl." I love this image. “From my bedroom window view, the fresh dusting of snow atop the rows of round hay bales that still needed hauling in from the field looked like frosted “Mini Wheats”, ready to be scooped up and placed in my breakfast bowl.”

I love this image.

]]> By: Al Schindler http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2339 Al Schindler Sun, 23 Dec 2007 18:03:22 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2339 You're quite right about it being a scene and not a story, but it was a little 'scene' that just came into my head and wouldn't get out until I had it written and submitted. Thanks for taking the time to comment. You’re quite right about it being a scene and not a story, but it was a little ‘scene’ that just came into my head and wouldn’t get out until I had it written and submitted. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

]]> By: avis Hickman-Gibb http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2338 avis Hickman-Gibb Sun, 23 Dec 2007 17:51:09 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2338 very evocative - nice scene to build on. It reminded me of a story I used to read to my son when he was little - called "First Snow" - same feel to it. very evocative – nice scene to build on. It reminded me of a story I used to read to my son when he was little – called “First Snow” – same feel to it.

]]> By: dj barber http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2337 dj barber Sun, 23 Dec 2007 16:04:49 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2337 Brrr! A nice winter picture. Brrr! A nice winter picture.

]]> By: Oonah V Joslin http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2335 Oonah V Joslin Sun, 23 Dec 2007 15:42:18 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2335 Very Christmassy. Very Christmassy.

]]> By: sylvia http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2333 sylvia Sun, 23 Dec 2007 12:29:37 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2333 I'd say this is a scene, not a story. Having said that, I liked it a lot - it really evoked that early morning winter feeling. I’d say this is a scene, not a story. Having said that, I liked it a lot – it really evoked that early morning winter feeling.

]]> By: Bonnie http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/comment-page-1/#comment-2332 Bonnie Sun, 23 Dec 2007 12:23:16 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/first-snow-by-albert-e-schindler/#comment-2332 Reality beats magic. But the magic came first. Great story! Reality beats magic. But the magic came first.
Great story!

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