Mon 20 Apr 2009
Hint Fiction: When Flash Fiction Becomes Just Too Flashy
Posted by Robert Swartwood under craft, elements of story, flash
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Flash fiction isn’t anything new. It’s been around since the time of Aesop. Why it’s becoming more prominent and popular today is because of this nifty digital age in which we now live.
Modern men and women have established severe forms of ADD — they don’t like sitting still for extended periods of time, and looking at long lines of text on a computer screen? Forget it. Twitter just proves this new disorder by giving 140-character updates of just about anything — there is even an online magazine published in the Twitter format, and one author has even begun to serialize his novel using the application. I wouldn’t be surprised if in the next year or two a new service is invented, a complete knock-off of Twitter, that displays updates of only 70-characters, because, let’s face it, 140-characters is just TOO MUCH.
Actually, the question I want to present now isn’t what’s too much.
It’s what’s too little.
Nearly everyone is familiar with Ernest Hemingway’s six-word story: “For sale: baby shoes, never worn.”
The legend of where this piece came from varies in detail, but basically Hemingway was challenged to write a story in just six words; he came back the next day with that little ditty, what he supposedly claimed was his best work.
Now do those six words constitute a story?
Some people think so; some don’t.
Some argue that there is no protagonist, no conflict, no beginning, middle, end.
Some argue that you don’t necessarily NEED a protagonist, conflict, a beginning, middle, end to make a story.
What is a story, after all? I’m not going to try to debase it by dissecting its Merriam-Webster definition. Everyone has his or her own skewed opinion of what it means.
Some are hardcore traditionalists who require the beginning, middle, end, protag, conflict, the whole nine yards. To them if any of those pieces are missing, then it’s not a true story.
Others are more lax. They understand inference plays a great part. After all, imagination IS key, but at what point does a writer depend too much upon a reader’s imagination?
Personally, I’ve always believed a writer should try to find a strong middle ground in his or her storytelling — a place where they can meet the reader halfway, just giving enough detail that the reader’s imagination is then able to fill in the rest. Those, I believe, are the best type of stories, because the reader becomes engaged in the process.
Good flash fiction demands this of its readers. It only gives so much, enough that the reader can fill in the blanks, help finish the painting, and then, at the end, can marvel at its brilliance.
But what about those really, really, really, really, REALLY short stories? The, you know, six-word stories. Are they considered flash fiction? If not, what should we call them?
Me, I want to coin a term, so I’m going to do it here and now: those very, very, very, VERY short stories should be called Hint Fiction. Because that’s all the reader is ever given. Just a hint. Not a scene, or a setting, or even a character sketch. They are given a hint, nothing more, and are asked — nay, forced — to fill in the blanks. And believe me, there are a lot of blanks.
What is the word limit of Hint Fiction? Well, if a drabble is 100 words, and a dribble is 50 words, then how about we say Hint Fiction cannot be anything more than 25 words.
One of the biggest hints in Hint Fiction is the title. It’s like the setup to a joke, and the “story” is the punch line. Without the one, the other won’t work.
For those of you wrinkling your noses right now, try to relate this to abstract art. Is a painting of three joined panels — one blue, one yellow, one red — art? You’re probably thinking no, but I guarantee you there are some who would pay thousands for such a piece.
Here’s another question: Is Vincent van Gogh’s The Starry Night art?
Almost all of you will probably agree that it is. And why do you think this? Because ever since your very first art class in school you were told that it was art. You were told that van Gogh was a genius and that The Starry Night is one of his masterpieces.
Let’s face it, art is subjective. Either we like it or we don’t. The same goes with flash fiction and, now that I’ve coined the term, Hint Fiction. We can argue about Hemingway’s six-word story, or any piece of Hint Fiction, until we’re blue in the face. In the end we won’t change any minds. We know what we know and we think what we think and nothing is going to change that.
If you haven’t realized it yet, I’m far from being a staunch traditionalist. I like trying new things. I think writers should be encouraged to try new things. It’s not always going to work, of course, but at least you tried, and that’s the important part.
As Samuel Beckett said: “Ever tried. Ever failed. No matter. Try again. Fail again. Fail better.”
Now go out there and spread the good word about Hint Fiction.
Just remember to tell them who sent you.
***Visit Robert’s blog for the Hint Fiction Contest, judged by best-selling author Stewart O’Nan. Prizes include a $25 gift certificate to Amazon and a copy of The Best of Every Day Fiction 2008. Deadline is midnight April 30th. Enter now!***
No time left. This contest is now closed!
Good luck to all who submitted new “HINTS” at Robert Swartwood’s Blog.
Robert Swartwood lives in Pennsylvania. His Hint Fiction has appeared in elimae, Lamination Colony, and The Northville Review.
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Welcome Rob and thank you for sharing with us the concept of hint fiction.
Great article Robert. There are a lot of writers struggling with these issues and writing ‘hint’ fiction on twitter right now. @arjunbasu, @instantfiction, @nanoism, just a few. Visit my favorites at http://twitter.com/twae to see a whole list. Mostly it is just a lot of fun to experiment.
How’s this for a story?
They were hot, they rocked. He left. She cried. She met another. They were hot. They waited. Here comes the bride.
A Brief Paradox
One day, I met my future self. He had a gun. I shot him first. Wonder what I did to piss myself off so much.
I dont know about the gun, but yu have a mighty pen.
Payback
Driving through the desert, even the highway patrols he passed didn’t know about the body in the trunk. No one beds the Mob boss’s mistress.
Joe,
I love your stories flash or not.
Hey everyone! If you have a submission for the fabulous “HINT FICTION” contest please visit Robert Swartwood’s blog. Link is at the bottom of the right hand column.
Whether or not they’re the most successful twiction or hint-fiction out there, but its definitely possible to have both characters and even sketch a scene in 25 words. Now, I think the ‘hint’ element is always there. But, if you read enough twitter-fiction, you’ll see that 6 words is far, far more limiting than 140 characters.
How that Got There
Whoever tells you that the worst she can say is no has never dated a woman with an affinity for heels and a violent streak.
“…just giving enough detail that the reader’s imagination is then able to fill in the rest.” Great article, it’s nice to find those who think as I do.
Forty years he waited, then one day she arrived holding the book. He didn’t know whether to kiss her, Finally asked: where have you been?
Deathbed Confession Extraction
“Wait! I’ll tell you everything!” the unconscious woman gurgled, just in time to stop the well-manicured finger from pulling the trigger.
A short story is a significant event given closure.
If you see the ghost car on Highway 44 between Interior and Wambli, you’ll die. Headlights approach.
hullo>
i am grace from uganda,
i have checked out the stories and so incredibly hot!
i love them
- ‘ Will you marry me?”
- ” Yes” Mugeni answered. Gakuba smiled.
She collapsed! He was the revenge and hatred rapist of years and miles away!
I like the hint fiction idea. it could actually be usefull. if you practiced it you could use the idea for blurbs on books, as hint fiction is realy a way of selling your idea.