Mon 7 Jun 2010
Two Ways to Avoid a Quick Trip to the Rejection Pile
Posted by Jim Harrington under advice, craft
[16] Comments
In response to a blog rant about rejection, Randall Brown suggested I post a series of interviews that list “in excruciating detail, all that each editor desires in his/her stories.” Wow. What a great idea. Thus began my Six Questions For. . . blog.
The first post went live in December 2009, and I reached a milestone near the end of May when I received my 100th set of responses (not all have appeared online yet). This post is the first in an occasional series where I attempt to draw some conclusions based on the editors’ answers. For this analysis, I chose eighty-eight sets of responses to gather data (not every editor was asked the same questions).
Two questions, in particular, provided some enlightening answers. “What are the top three reasons a story is rejected?” and “What common mistakes do you encounter that turn you off to a story?” A number of responses appeared multiple times: “It’s not a story.” “The prose didn’t match the magazine’s style.” “It didn’t fit our current needs.” Many editors expressed the idea that rejections weren’t personal. It was often a matter of numbers. Editors simply couldn’t accept every story/poem they received; and, as one editor put it, with so many submissions, he looked for any reason to reject a story.
Two items stood out as author responsibilities that many writers appear to ignore, or don’t feel are important.
Twenty-five editors mentioned not reading the publication guidelines as a reason submissions were rejected. Editors who receive 200-300 submissions a month don’t have time to reformat stories sent using strange fonts or that are double-spaced with paragraphs indented, when the guidelines specify Times Roman, single-spaced, and no indents. Nor does it help an author to send stories inappropriate for the content of the publication (e.g., sending a literary story to a magazine that publishes fantasy and science fiction). I know one editor who returns e-mail submissions without reading them if the subject heading does not follow the guidelines.
Failure to read the guidelines came in a distant second to a surprising category. Over half of the editors (fifty-two) mentioned poor grammar as a reason a story was rejected. Many said they could overlook a few mistakes. One editor put the limit at three. Others weren’t as kind. For many, poor grammar was the sign of a sloppy, unprofessional writer. As one editor put it, “Grammar counts.”
In my brief time as an editor, I have yet to reject a story for not following the guidelines (although I came close). I have turned away stories with poor grammar. One, in particular, I liked; but I decided I didn’t want to spend the amount time it would’ve taken to get the story ready for publication. This problem isn’t limited to new writers. I received a story from an author with a number of quality publications, yet rejected her work because of poor grammar and other editing errors. I felt insulted that someone with that amount of experience thought so little of me as an editor that she felt sending a poorly crafted story was acceptable–and I told her so in my e-mail response.
Getting stories published is tough. There are hundreds (thousands?) of excellent stories submitted every week. Those stories submitted by authors who don’t act in a professional manner by reading and following a publication’s guidelines and showing respect for the editor by sending clear, error free copy are the most likely to be found in an editor’s “rejected” pile–regardless of the quality of the story.
_______________________
Flash fiction bewitched Jim Harrington in early in 2007, and he’s read, written, studied, and agonized over the form since. He writes about his personal writing journey at Quotes on Writing . His Six Questions For blog provides editors and publishers a place to “tell it like it is.” In his spare time, her serves as the flash fiction editor for Apollo’s Lyre .
16 Responses to “ Two Ways to Avoid a Quick Trip to the Rejection Pile ”
Trackbacks & Pingbacks:
-
[...] to cross-promote a post over at Flash Fiction Chronicles that I think any writer can benefit from: Two Ways to Avoid a Quick Trip to the Rejection Pile, by Jim Harrington. Please, check it out and leave a comment – nothing encourages a writer [...]
-
[...] is a great article from Everyday Fiction about why you might get rejected by a [...]



Flash Fiction Chronicles is listed in the 2010 November/December issue of Writers' Digest as one of the 25 Best Online Consumer Magazine Markets for writers. 
What a great post – thank you for this!
Rejection is something all writers deal with, and I think getting a peek over the fence into the editorial side of the process is an invaluable tool. Knowing in advance what the most common mistakes are prepares us not to make them, so that our work is in top form when it goes out.
And if it still doesn’t find a place in the world, we can always blame the numbers.
Excellent comments and suggestions, Jim. I love your ‘Six Questions For’ blog.
This is a super informative post. It’s helpful to see the other side.
Thanks so much, Jim, for sharing this here. Your Six Questions for… blog is wonderful to help us (the writers) to understand a little better what certain magazines are looking for.
Thanks Tanya, Richard, Amanda and Gay. The Six Questions blog has exceeded my expectation.
Great post. As an editor, I share your feelings about grammar; it is a bit insulting to receive a submission with dozens of grammatical mistakes. Most of us do this for free because we enjoy doing it. At least give us a break and send us something that is ready for publication.
And yet I see many, many published works still containing egregious grammar errors, such as “lie” for “lay” (or vice versa) or “flaunt” for “flout”, or “I” used where “me” should go, or improper understanding of “shall” and “will”.
I don’t understand why writers find it so difficult to sort out grammar and punctuation.
Great work, Jim!
http://www.abyssandapex.com/201004-editorial.html brings up another item you might want to do a series on: reprints.
Great post Jim. It’s a tough world and professionalism is the minimum criterion (not proofing/poor grammar and not reading guidelines are unprofessional habits) for writers wanting publication.
Good to see you here, Nathaniel and Wendy (their responses were used in this analysis). And thanks for the comment Rumjhum.
It’s my first time to your blog. Thank you!
(Just to let you know, there’s a typo in your bio. “Her” is written instead of “He.”)
Thanks for stopping by, Cynthia. Hope to see you back. And thanks for the typo mention. Since I’m not the site owner, I can’t correct an error once the post is published. I’ve fixed the issue for subsequent posts.
A good summing-up, Jim.
I guess the one thing I’ll say is that I’m constantly finding typos and grammar errors in published works, including books published by the larger publishing houses. If editors are expecting my submission to be perfect then shouldn’t I be able to expect their publishing firms final product to be perfect?
That mentioned, I do try my best to have my work as perfect as possible. I do agree that it is important and a sign of a professional attitude toward one’s work.
Thank you for this, Jim. It is a great companion to your “Six Questions . . .” blog.
Thanks for the comment, Sandra. I’ve noticed errors in the books I’ve read also. I assume it’s due to economics. Publishers have to cut back somewhere, I guess. The one story I mentioned in the article that I rejected because of too many mistakes was a reprint! I didn’t check the original to see if the story had been published as it was sent to me.