Comments on: GHOST GUN • by Bradley Mason Hamlin

By: Gerard Demayne

Gerard Demayne — Mon, 07 Jan 2008 11:14:14 +0000

Augustus puts me in mind of Augustus Cain from the “western” Soul Catcher by Michael White.

Initially the incongruities jarred with me as well but overall that was a damn fine story.

By: Steven Smethurst

Steven Smethurst — Sat, 29 Dec 2007 20:52:01 +0000

i’m not much of a fan of Western but i like this story.
good job!

By: Jordan Lapp

Jordan Lapp — Thu, 27 Dec 2007 16:59:40 +0000

Rob,

Thanks very much for your comments. Neither Camille nor I has ever editted a Western before (since we NEVER get them in the slush pile), so I’m afraid much of the fault here can be laid at our doorstep. We’ll keep your comments in mind for the next Western we get!

By: Camille Gooderham Campbell

Camille Gooderham Campbell — Thu, 27 Dec 2007 08:35:45 +0000

I very much enjoyed the combination of genres here, particularly as we get hardly any western submissions. I liked the characterization of Beatrice and the interesting interplay between her and Gus.