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GODS OF CONCRETE AND STEEL • by C.L. Holland

Niall knew what people said about him. They said he was slow, simple. Not right in the head. They looked at him staring off into space, at the girders on the local building site, at the opaque water of the canals, and then they gave him a slap on the side of the head and told him to stop lollygagging. Stop staring at nothing, they said. He wasn’t staring at nothing though. He was watching the gods.

He knew they were gods because his mother had told him, before she died. Look and you’ll see them, she’d said, listen and you’ll hear their laughter. Water, and wasteland, steel and stone, all of them echo with the gods’ laughter, because the gods know we can see them but we choose not to.

Niall chose to see them, but he didn’t think the gods had noticed. The grey ones scurried away if he came near them, heads bobbing. Maybe they thought he’d tread on them. They were very small after all, even if they could fly, although he didn’t suppose being trodden on would kill a god. Maybe it just hurt.

There were no gods around today as he walked along the dusty path alongside the canal, although if he listened closely and ignored the sound of the flyover he could hear them singing in the distance. It didn’t bother him that he couldn’t see them, he knew where to find all kinds of gods. Sometimes, if you crept up just right, you could get really close before a god noticed you. It wasn’t a good idea if they had baby gods with them, though. Then they’d stare at you and scream, and sometimes even attack.

The path wound away from the canal. He kicked at a brown stone, watching it bounce twice before it plopped into the water, and then followed the route to the flyover where the white gods lived.

The flyover roared like a monster made of concrete and steel and drowned out the gods. They lived among the girders underneath, and it was only a short swoop from there down to streets that were full of litter and abandoned takeaway. Niall hopped over a sagging chain-link fence onto the uniform grey of the pavement, following the path upwards alongside the traffic. The sun shone in his eyes and made it difficult to see. That meant he was going the right way.

At the top he paused to look over the railing at the road below. Hardly any traffic was moving and the parked cars looked like forgotten toys. He closed his eyes and leaned further, straining to hear. After a moment he caught it, the strange harsh noise that the flyover gods made when they were talking to each other. He could make the noise too, but he could have been saying anything and didn’t want to offend them, so he didn’t.

One of the gods moved, bursting out with a whirring of wings. Niall watched it fly to the roof of one of the buildings below. He thought it was watching him.

“What?” he asked. The god hopped to the street, investigated a bin, then flew back up again. As Niall waited it flew out again, followed by two more. Now it looked like they were all watching him.

“What?” he asked again. They turned their backs, shutting him out. He wasn’t worthy. Tears filled his eyes and he wondered if he should have brought bread again, or some crisps. Maybe the gods were angry because he hadn’t brought a gift.

“Look who it is. It’s the ‘tard!”

The voice was quiet even though the owner was shouting. Still at the bottom of the hill, a group of older boys were approaching, breaking into a run. Niall wanted to flee, like he did in the playground, but he knew they were faster than he was. There were no teachers here to save him from a beating. A portion of chips wheeled through the air towards him. The polystyrene dish fell at his feet and splattered his shoes with curry sauce.

The gods had noticed his danger. Barely a moment passed before they were thronged around him, a feathered carpet between him and the other boys. They accepted the offering at his feet eagerly, even though he hadn’t been the one to bring it. The other boys slowed and eyed the gods with suspicion. Niall could see a future of scrapes and bruises in their pinched-up faces, and he pressed himself against the rail.

“What are you doing, retard?” one of the boys asked. “We won’t hurt you, will we, Steve?” There was a nudge in the ribs and a snigger, and Steve answered with a mumble around a mouthful of chips.

One of the gods snapped at the boy who’d spoken as he drew too close. He aimed a curse and a kick at it. The white god gave a harsh cry as it launched into the air.

“Stop it!” Niall moved without thought. He snatched a slippery handful of chips from the ground and threw them at the boys.

Having finished the rest of the offering, the gods went after this one too.

Steve screamed as white bodies flung themselves at the tray in his hands. Others went after the leftovers that Niall had thrown. The cries of boys and gods mingled as Steve and his friend scrabbled away and fled back down the hill.

The gods settled, searching the ground for scraps. One perched beside Niall on the rail and fixed him with a beady eye. Niall’s heart swelled with love and then, as one, the gods took flight.


C.L. Holland has a Bachelors degree in English with Creative Writing, and a Masters degree in English, and was a winner of Writers of the Future for 2008. Her secret identity is that of a humble officeworker. She has an evergrowing collection of books and expects them to reach critical mass any time now.

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Posted on August 9, 2009 in Literary, Stories
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  • http://users.beagle.com.au/peterl P.M.Lawrence

    “…a sagging chain-link fenced…”

    Typo for “fence”?

  • Jen

    THis was really interesting, although I have to say I didn’t realize the Gods were birds for awhile. I’m happy Niall got revenge on the bullies and that his “Gods” find him worthy.

  • J.C. Towler

    I was waiting for a supernatural turn of events and pleased this didn’t go down that path (though I do like F & SF stories just fine). Good tale.

  • http://bookspot.blogspot.com Camille Gooderham Campbell

    Typo corrected; thanks, P.M.!

  • http://teenangel.netfirms.com Jim Hartley

    Never did figure out (until I saw Jen’s comment) that the Gods were birds … I was halfway between “Gods are real” (fantasy) and “Gods are Niall’s fantasy” (mainline story of Niall’s imagination) … finally settled on fantasy when the Gods did something the other boys could detect. I think the “bird” thing needs to be brought out more clearly to clue in people who have already decided something else (for a fantasy/SF fan/writer, accepting the “Gods” as Gods, supernatural beings, is all too easy).

    Also had a little trouble with some of the Brit-isms. I was halfway through before I realized that “flyover” was not a path for the Gods, it was just an overpass! “Takeaway” for garbage made me stumble a bit, too. I realize those on the other side of the pond are going to use their own slang, and I have picked up on a lot of it by now, but sometimes it makes difficult reading.

  • tigerlily

    Jim – takeaway to us Brits is as takeout to you Americans. :)

  • http://teenangel.netfirms.com Jim Hartley

    Re tigerlily’s comment – oops, I got it wrong, just guessing from the context “full of litter and abandoned takeaway”. That’s the problem with crosspond slang slinging!

  • Deborah

    I liked this a lot. I could literally feel Niall’s feeblemindedness. That was very well done. In the middle of the story, when I realized the gods were pigeons, I was tickled pink! So ironic that a person, no matter how touched in the head, would consider rats-with-wings as gods! Love that. Perhaps a country-type person who hasn’t seen pigeons in a city would be confused, but I’d think most people would understand very well where this story is going early on. As a Yank, I had no trouble with your Brit-speak. When you read enough original fic, you pick it up quickly so no worries there. Again, very well done. I really enjoyed it.

  • GMoney

    Interesting, simple story. I thought it was going to be supernatural, then soon realised it was likely to be birds. I like this was hinted at and then revealed more as it went on.
    I’m a Brit, but never heard of lollygagging until now!

    Small typo “…he wondered if *her* should have brought bread again”

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  • http://bookspot.blogspot.com Camille Gooderham Campbell

    Typo corrected; thanks, GMoney!

  • http://www.fathomlessbox.com Evan Jensen

    Cheryl, your work continues to fulfill. Glad this was posted here… and via your blogomatic tickertape.

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