Comments on: HOW THE HUMAN GOT HIS FREE WILL • by Deven D Atkinson http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Thu, 29 Jul 2010 20:25:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Darlett http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-20656 Darlett Mon, 28 Dec 2009 17:47:17 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-20656 Wow, I agree with your son. I am glad that Rudy CHOSE to order Pizza. Wow, I agree with your son. I am glad that Rudy CHOSE to order Pizza.

]]> By: Ross http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-20441 Ross Sun, 20 Dec 2009 14:48:03 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-20441 Was Kipling really that anal retentive? Was Kipling really that anal retentive?

]]> By: The author's son http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-20040 The author's son Sun, 06 Dec 2009 19:26:48 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-20040 Some of you have it a little wrong. This was perhaps the biggest climax Rudy would ever have. Some of you have it a little wrong. This was perhaps the biggest climax Rudy would ever have.

]]> By: Patricia J. Hale http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-19746 Patricia J. Hale Fri, 27 Nov 2009 15:08:56 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-19746 Enjoyed this piece, thanks. Enjoyed this piece, thanks.

]]> By: J.C. Towler http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-19724 J.C. Towler Thu, 26 Nov 2009 15:28:23 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-19724 Kids mowing the grass? Being polite to their parents? What is this, some kind of twisted science fiction story? Time travel perhaps? :-) Not bad. I actually liked it better the 2nd time through. --John Kids mowing the grass? Being polite to their parents? What is this, some kind of twisted science fiction story? Time travel perhaps? :-)

Not bad. I actually liked it better the 2nd time through.

–John

]]> By: Deven http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-19710 Deven Thu, 26 Nov 2009 05:07:14 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-19710 Thanks for the comments everyone. I like having stories published here because is the direct, insightful, comments. Thanks for the comments everyone. I like having stories published here because is the direct, insightful, comments.

]]> By: Sharon http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-19704 Sharon Wed, 25 Nov 2009 21:02:13 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-19704 I really like this. Apparently, something of Rudy's counseling broke through just at the right time. I wish I hadn't been such a control freak parent, too. I really like this. Apparently, something of Rudy’s counseling broke through just at the right time. I wish I hadn’t been such a control freak parent, too.

]]> By: Tyrean http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-19703 Tyrean Wed, 25 Nov 2009 18:56:22 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-19703 I really liked that the ending didn't go the way it seemed like it would - many stories just build up and release the tension in a standard "protanganist takes out his frustrations" kind of way. I'm thankful that this character actually let go of his anger differently. I don't think that makes the piece flat . . . but maybe it convicts the readers who expect the usual. I really liked that the ending didn’t go the way it seemed like it would – many stories just build up and release the tension in a standard “protanganist takes out his frustrations” kind of way. I’m thankful that this character actually let go of his anger differently. I don’t think that makes the piece flat . . . but maybe it convicts the readers who expect the usual.

]]> By: Alvin http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-19701 Alvin Wed, 25 Nov 2009 16:47:13 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-19701 Kids now-a-days! #$&%^$# Doesn't everyone know how to mow a lawn correctly! .... Oh ... um ... hi. Great piece. While I have to agree with Jim somewhat, about the ending, I didn't mind so much. It's a great snapshot at this point in the relationship. The writing kept me going till the end. I like that. Kids now-a-days! #$&%^$# Doesn’t everyone know how to mow a lawn correctly! …. Oh … um … hi.

Great piece. While I have to agree with Jim somewhat, about the ending, I didn’t mind so much. It’s a great snapshot at this point in the relationship. The writing kept me going till the end. I like that.

]]> By: gay degani http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/comment-page-1/#comment-19700 gay degani Wed, 25 Nov 2009 16:33:06 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/how-the-human-got-his-free-will-by-deven-d-atkinson/#comment-19700 Another unique Deven Atkinson piece. Very nice. Another unique Deven Atkinson piece. Very nice.

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