Comments on: ICEBERG • by Patsy Collins http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Sat, 20 Mar 2010 16:32:35 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Fy gweithgareddau Diigo 07/05/2009 (a.m.) « Diddorol neu ddoniol http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-16082 Fy gweithgareddau Diigo 07/05/2009 (a.m.) « Diddorol neu ddoniol Mon, 06 Jul 2009 16:30:54 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/#comment-16082 [...] ICEBERG – by Patsy Collins (everydayfiction.com) [...] [...] ICEBERG – by Patsy Collins (everydayfiction.com) [...]

]]> By: Erin http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-15971 Erin Wed, 01 Jul 2009 18:44:57 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/#comment-15971 This was a great story. I love the unreliable narrator, and how he is revealed to be even more unreliable in the end. The matter-of-fact dialog about his weird delusions worked well. Great job, and a good twist. This was a great story. I love the unreliable narrator, and how he is revealed to be even more unreliable in the end. The matter-of-fact dialog about his weird delusions worked well. Great job, and a good twist.

]]> By: Phot's http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-15967 Phot's Wed, 01 Jul 2009 16:41:26 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/#comment-15967 Thank you. Thank you.

]]> By: Walt Giersbach http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-15931 Walt Giersbach Mon, 29 Jun 2009 20:06:44 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/iceberg-by-patsy-collins/#comment-15931 A very nice story, Patsy. Overly long, but the reading investkent paid off in the ending. Reminded me mightily of one Alex Moisi wrote a while back. Coincidentally, I also wrote "The Iceberg," published by Bewildering Stories in February, at http://bewilderingstories.com/issue326/iceberg.html. A very nice story, Patsy. Overly long, but the reading investkent paid off in the ending. Reminded me mightily of one Alex Moisi wrote a while back.

Coincidentally, I also wrote “The Iceberg,” published by Bewildering Stories in February, at http://bewilderingstories.com/issue326/iceberg.html.

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