http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Mon, 15 Mar 2010 17:08:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/comment-page-1/#comment-15872 rajesh Sat, 27 Jun 2009 10:42:29 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/#comment-15872 nice one. infact i have come out with an entirely diff story idea after reading it. this has inspired me. nice one. infact i have come out with an entirely diff story idea after reading it. this has inspired me.

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/comment-page-1/#comment-15101 Edward Caputo Mon, 25 May 2009 17:23:38 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/#comment-15101 A few days late, but I wanted to add that this was an excellent story (not pleasant, but that's not a detraction), it captures a realistic scenario perfectly, right down to the hints of the wife's moving on. A rare 5 from me. A few days late, but I wanted to add that this was an excellent story (not pleasant, but that’s not a detraction), it captures a realistic scenario perfectly, right down to the hints of the wife’s moving on. A rare 5 from me.

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/comment-page-1/#comment-15021 Roberta SchulbergGoro Fri, 22 May 2009 14:20:34 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/#comment-15021 Jerry Constantino - Just an aside, but "you can't pick your" what? Jerry Constantino – Just an aside, but “you can’t pick your” what?

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/comment-page-1/#comment-14984 Alan Beard Thu, 21 May 2009 10:24:20 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/incomplete-by-robert-swartwood/#comment-14984 economically done, rather moving, particularly the thumb ending. economically done, rather moving, particularly the thumb ending.

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