Comments on: INVINCIBLE • by Steve Goble http://www.everydayfiction.com/invincible-by-steve-goble/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Sat, 20 Mar 2010 13:23:50 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Lyn http://www.everydayfiction.com/invincible-by-steve-goble/comment-page-1/#comment-4174 Lyn Thu, 27 Mar 2008 01:18:28 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/invincble-%e2%80%a2-by-steve-goble/#comment-4174 Well done. The battle scene was tightly told and drove the story forward as it drove Ulf to his happy fate. I also appreciated the variety of descriptions you used, for example: Necromancer, Dark General, sinister being. Kept the story from becoming stale. Would liked to have heard Ulf share a parting word, one to his family, before he died. But still, a great piece of flash. Congrats. Well done. The battle scene was tightly told and drove the story forward as it drove Ulf to his happy fate. I also appreciated the variety of descriptions you used, for example: Necromancer, Dark General, sinister being. Kept the story from becoming stale. Would liked to have heard Ulf share a parting word, one to his family, before he died. But still, a great piece of flash. Congrats.

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]]> By: David http://www.everydayfiction.com/invincible-by-steve-goble/comment-page-1/#comment-3558 David Wed, 27 Feb 2008 14:50:58 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/invincble-%e2%80%a2-by-steve-goble/#comment-3558 Good to see you in print, Steve. Lots of action! Love to see that. Thanks for linking from your blog, too. I would have forgotten to click over. Jordan, et al: great site! Keep up the good work! DMWino Good to see you in print, Steve. Lots of action! Love to see that. Thanks for linking from your blog, too. I would have forgotten to click over.
Jordan, et al: great site! Keep up the good work!
DMWino

]]> By: Deven http://www.everydayfiction.com/invincible-by-steve-goble/comment-page-1/#comment-3490 Deven Fri, 22 Feb 2008 02:06:44 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/invincble-%e2%80%a2-by-steve-goble/#comment-3490 What a ride! Enjoyed it immensely. Deven What a ride!
Enjoyed it immensely.

Deven

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