Comments on: MRS. WILSON’S BREAK • by Avis Hickman-Gibb

By: GMoney

GMoney — Sat, 26 Jan 2008 17:23:59 +0000

Agreed – I meant that I read it as if you were saying that there was silence but also with some noise, which isn’t possible.

DJ Barber — Sat, 26 Jan 2008 02:57:58 +0000

A powerfully sad story–and all too common, I fear.

Avis Hickman-Gibb — Fri, 25 Jan 2008 22:00:18 +0000

Thank you all so much for all your comments – they do mean so much.

G money – I find there are all sorts of qualities in a silence – not just the lack of noise.

Avis

Avis Hickman-Gibb — Fri, 25 Jan 2008 21:54:28 +0000

You have taken my breath away – whoever you are! Thank you so much.

Avis

-- — Fri, 25 Jan 2008 21:33:18 +0000

Absolutely heartbreaking. Rachel was very real to me. I can’t get over this story. Outstanding. Incredible.

Barry Wood — Fri, 25 Jan 2008 19:27:39 +0000

“Why is this little girl shouting at me, for Christâ€™s sake?”

A powerful thought after being beaten by a son. Well written, Avis Hickman-Gibb.

Rena Sherwood — Fri, 25 Jan 2008 19:20:30 +0000

Very realistic, unfortunately.

Jason — Fri, 25 Jan 2008 18:40:08 +0000

a barbed twist I’ll say too. Dang! Nicely written Avis.

mark dalligan — Fri, 25 Jan 2008 17:47:01 +0000

Sad, but so well written and with an unexpected barbed twist.

Cheers

Mark

gay degani — Fri, 25 Jan 2008 16:00:21 +0000

Well done, Avis. Strong writing, clearly portrayed, with the “ahhhhhhh” type of ending I love. Thanks.