Comments on: OVERLOOKED • by Patsy Collins http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Sat, 20 Mar 2010 15:37:27 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Debi Blood http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-19423 Debi Blood Mon, 16 Nov 2009 18:29:26 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/#comment-19423 What may appear as a character sketch to others is a vignette to me, and I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Clever little slice of life! What may appear as a character sketch to others is a vignette to me, and I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Clever little slice of life!

]]> By: Phot's http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-19354 Phot's Sun, 15 Nov 2009 09:49:47 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/#comment-19354 Thanks! Yeah, I might use these characters again in a longer piece sometime. Thanks!

Yeah, I might use these characters again in a longer piece sometime.

]]> By: Rob http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-19348 Rob Sun, 15 Nov 2009 02:26:04 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/#comment-19348 Nice little piece-- I'm afraid it didn't go anywhere though. I think you tried to sum-up his whole adult life in 1,000 words. Too big a task. Pick an incident supported by the very nice character you've built here. I look forward to more from you in the future. Nice little piece– I’m afraid it didn’t go anywhere though. I think you tried to sum-up his whole adult life in 1,000 words. Too big a task. Pick an incident supported by the very nice character you’ve built here. I look forward to more from you in the future.

]]> By: Jen http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-19336 Jen Sat, 14 Nov 2009 01:18:15 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/overlooked-by-patsy-collins/#comment-19336 This was a cute story and I did like the budding romance, but I really would've liked to have seen where that had gone. This was a cute story and I did like the budding romance, but I really would’ve liked to have seen where that had gone.

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