Comments on: RAIN • by B. Teuscher http://www.everydayfiction.com/rain-by-b-teuscher/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Sun, 14 Mar 2010 10:36:39 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: DW http://www.everydayfiction.com/rain-by-b-teuscher/comment-page-1/#comment-9430 DW Sun, 19 Oct 2008 00:21:17 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=387#comment-9430 Nice descriptions. Very suspenseful. Nice descriptions. Very suspenseful.

]]> By: Esther http://www.everydayfiction.com/rain-by-b-teuscher/comment-page-1/#comment-9415 Esther Sat, 18 Oct 2008 05:17:24 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=387#comment-9415 What a sad and beautiful story. You're very descriptive which helped paint the sad image of a boy seeking safety somewhere and for some reason. I liked that you kept the reader in the dark until the very end; it kept me intrigued. The reveal of the kitten at the end was the perfect conclusion. It made me even feel even more for the boy as it shows how tender-hearted he was. And the fact that he sought refuge in a school made me think a school is probably one of the few places he has ever felt safe. Like I said, sad and beautiful. What a sad and beautiful story. You’re very descriptive which helped paint the sad image of a boy seeking safety somewhere and for some reason. I liked that you kept the reader in the dark until the very end; it kept me intrigued. The reveal of the kitten at the end was the perfect conclusion. It made me even feel even more for the boy as it shows how tender-hearted he was. And the fact that he sought refuge in a school made me think a school is probably one of the few places he has ever felt safe. Like I said, sad and beautiful.

]]> By: Patti http://www.everydayfiction.com/rain-by-b-teuscher/comment-page-1/#comment-7766 Patti Tue, 05 Aug 2008 20:31:52 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=387#comment-7766 wonderful- very subtle and simple language, sad and suspenseful. wonderful- very subtle and simple language, sad and suspenseful.

]]> By: Kresie http://www.everydayfiction.com/rain-by-b-teuscher/comment-page-1/#comment-7711 Kresie Sun, 03 Aug 2008 01:49:37 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=387#comment-7711 Excellent story written with a lot of understated emotion. I love the mood and physical setting. Please submit more shorts! Excellent story written with a lot of understated emotion. I love the mood and physical setting.

Please submit more shorts!

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