Comments on: SHADOWS • by Scott M. Sandridge http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/ Short fiction in your inbox, Daily! Fri, 29 Aug 2008 03:23:35 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Short Fiction - Other « Scott M. Sandridge http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/#comment-3505 Short Fiction - Other « Scott M. Sandridge Fri, 22 Feb 2008 20:48:35 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/#comment-3505 [...] Published in Everyday Fiction as their Halloween Special, Oct. 31, [...] [...] Published in Everyday Fiction as their Halloween Special, Oct. 31, [...]

]]> By: Scott http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/#comment-1532 Scott Mon, 12 Nov 2007 22:52:56 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/#comment-1532 Hey, no prob. ;) Besides, all that was intentional. Things are much more terrifying when you don't know what's really going on. That, and I couldn't break POV just to tell the reader. Hey, no prob. ;)

Besides, all that was intentional. Things are much more terrifying when you don’t know what’s really going on. That, and I couldn’t break POV just to tell the reader.

]]> By: Hasmita http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/#comment-1528 Hasmita Mon, 12 Nov 2007 19:18:09 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/#comment-1528 Hi Scott, This didn't read like a story to me. The start was good, there was a great build-up, but after the parents are killed (how?) the rest falls flat because it's too vague, and left me wondering what all of it was. Sorry, but I thought I could leave a negative comment since you've already got so many nice ones,and wouldn't take this badly. Best wishes. Hi Scott,

This didn’t read like a story to me. The start was good, there was a great build-up, but after the parents are killed (how?) the rest falls flat because it’s too vague, and left me wondering what all of it was.

Sorry, but I thought I could leave a negative comment since you’ve already got so many nice ones,and wouldn’t take this badly.

Best wishes.

]]> By: scott http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/#comment-1429 scott Tue, 06 Nov 2007 23:26:10 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/shadows-by-scott-m-sandridge/#comment-1429 Thanks Lyn! :) Thanks Lyn! :)

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