Comments on: SHAKERS • by Marc Bona http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Fri, 12 Mar 2010 17:03:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Jen http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/comment-page-1/#comment-16210 Jen Thu, 09 Jul 2009 22:44:27 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/#comment-16210 Nice little slice of life piece, but I can't say I felt much for Kiley. Nice little slice of life piece, but I can’t say I felt much for Kiley.

]]> By: jennifer walmsley http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/comment-page-1/#comment-16160 jennifer walmsley Thu, 09 Jul 2009 06:50:11 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/#comment-16160 I enjoyed the story and sympathised with your MC, but I felt the description of the football game went on for too long. But then I prefer Rugby. I enjoyed the story and sympathised with your MC, but I felt the description of the football game went on for too long.

But then I prefer Rugby.

]]> By: Roberta SchulbergGoro http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/comment-page-1/#comment-16085 Roberta SchulbergGoro Mon, 06 Jul 2009 17:56:37 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/#comment-16085 Jenny - It might have been the gambling aspect that interested him in both equities and gaming, although of course equities involves reason and knowledge. He just might have had the wild desire to sow his wild oats, throw caution and tensions to the wind and trust to luck alone in fun, carefree gambling. Some people call this mid-life crisis. Jenny – It might have been the gambling aspect that interested him in both equities and gaming, although of course equities involves reason and knowledge. He just might have had the wild desire to sow his wild oats, throw caution and tensions to the wind and trust to luck alone in fun, carefree gambling. Some people call this mid-life crisis.

]]> By: Sharon http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/comment-page-1/#comment-16081 Sharon Mon, 06 Jul 2009 15:54:24 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/shakers-by-marc-bona/#comment-16081 I liked this story very much and found it as complete as any 30-minute episode of Twilight Zone or Alfred Hitchcock Presents--minus a creepy ending. Poor shakers! I do think he smashed them deliberately. I liked this story very much and found it as complete as any 30-minute episode of Twilight Zone or Alfred Hitchcock Presents–minus a creepy ending. Poor shakers! I do think he smashed them deliberately.

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