Comments on: THE COLD TRUTH • by R. L. Copple http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-cold-truth-by-r-l-copple/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Thu, 11 Mar 2010 19:55:02 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: R. L. Copple http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-cold-truth-by-r-l-copple/comment-page-1/#comment-700 R. L. Copple Mon, 01 Oct 2007 19:46:40 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-cold-truth-by-r-l-copple/#comment-700 Thanks for everyone's comments. Yeah Frank, we didn't bring the fat lady along on this trip. Would have thrown off the strict weight load on the ship. ;) So, if she was singing, we didn't hear it. Thanks for everyone’s comments. Yeah Frank, we didn’t bring the fat lady along on this trip. Would have thrown off the strict weight load on the ship. ;)

So, if she was singing, we didn’t hear it.

]]> By: Frank Creed http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-cold-truth-by-r-l-copple/comment-page-1/#comment-684 Frank Creed Mon, 01 Oct 2007 06:55:23 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-cold-truth-by-r-l-copple/#comment-684 I see a few layers of silly voice, like: “Yeah, and I’m Zeus,” Simon said. Simon Sez? I liked your dialog especially. The only thing I'd change is (I'm sorry, I can't read uncritically and we can leave comments even--heh), Neil and Simon exchange facts that the other should know--the data seems there-for-the-reader and a little contrived. Never written space-opera, but realistically slipping facts to readers has GOT to be tough. Even tougher in flash-fiction's length. Kay, lack of length. Nice description, spiff story. But I thought Opera wern't over till the fat lady . . . *duck thrown rotten veggies* Faith, f I see a few layers of silly voice, like:
“Yeah, and I’m Zeus,” Simon said.
Simon Sez?

I liked your dialog especially. The only thing I’d change is (I’m sorry, I can’t read uncritically and we can leave comments even–heh), Neil and Simon exchange facts that the other should know–the data seems there-for-the-reader and a little contrived. Never written space-opera, but realistically slipping facts to readers has GOT to be tough. Even tougher in flash-fiction’s length. Kay, lack of length.

Nice description, spiff story. But I thought Opera wern’t over till the fat lady . . .

*duck thrown rotten veggies*

Faith,
f

]]> By: Scott M. Sandridge http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-cold-truth-by-r-l-copple/comment-page-1/#comment-679 Scott M. Sandridge Mon, 01 Oct 2007 01:10:15 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-cold-truth-by-r-l-copple/#comment-679 Awesome story Rick! WooT! Awesome story Rick! WooT!

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