Comments on: THE COLONY CAPTAIN’S JOURNAL • by Camille Alexa http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/ Short fiction in your inbox, Daily! Mon, 13 Oct 2008 08:35:33 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: H von D http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/#comment-1568 H von D Thu, 15 Nov 2007 14:02:26 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/#comment-1568 Ha, well done! Succint, spooky, self-aware, sexy, speculative - all the hallmarks of successful genre lit. Ha, well done! Succint, spooky, self-aware, sexy, speculative - all the hallmarks of successful genre lit.

]]> By: Camille Gooderham Campbell http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/#comment-1260 Camille Gooderham Campbell Sun, 28 Oct 2007 07:40:22 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/#comment-1260 It's interesting (and very rare) to find such a complete and complex story laid out in poetic form. This piece definitely blurs the line between story and poem. It’s interesting (and very rare) to find such a complete and complex story laid out in poetic form. This piece definitely blurs the line between story and poem.

]]> By: rumjhum http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/#comment-1195 rumjhum Fri, 26 Oct 2007 09:28:51 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/#comment-1195 I couldn't get to this story earlier as my system had crashed. But I have to write that this is one of the most powerful pieces of experimental fiction or poetic fiction that I've recently read. Looking forward to more! :-) I couldn’t get to this story earlier as my system had crashed. But I have to write that this is one of the most powerful pieces of experimental fiction or poetic fiction that I’ve recently read. Looking forward to more! :-)

]]> By: Heidi Ruby Miller http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/#comment-1168 Heidi Ruby Miller Thu, 25 Oct 2007 22:08:17 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-colony-captains-journal-by-camille-alexa/#comment-1168 Niiice, Camille! The progression of each entry was strong in atmosphere and foreshadowing. You got me with ending because I thought the narrator was going to be the eater, not the meal. Very enjoyable. ~Heidi Niiice, Camille!

The progression of each entry was strong in atmosphere and foreshadowing. You got me with ending because I thought the narrator was going to be the eater, not the meal.

Very enjoyable.

~Heidi

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