http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Fri, 12 Mar 2010 05:29:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-14205 Roberta SchulbergGoro Fri, 17 Apr 2009 19:30:14 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/#comment-14205 TW and Jen: I agree with comments 31 and 54 that authors have the right to make changes in a published (or unpublished) story, but not others. TW and Jen: I agree with comments 31 and 54 that authors have the right to make changes in a published (or unpublished) story, but not others.

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-14200 Phot's Fri, 17 Apr 2009 17:38:28 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/#comment-14200 Thank you! Thank you!

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-13883 TW Mon, 06 Apr 2009 15:41:53 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/#comment-13883 Well done. I'd end it after "silence" and leave the last couple of dozen words unwritten, but still, well-crafted by a writer who understands storytelling. Well done. I’d end it after “silence” and leave the last couple of dozen words unwritten, but still, well-crafted by a writer who understands storytelling.

]]> http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/comment-page-1/#comment-13853 niddy Sun, 05 Apr 2009 15:13:20 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-scent-of-lilac-by-patsy-collins/#comment-13853 I liked the idea of the granny being the bully something you don't see too often. As a short I thought it worked and enjoyed the read. I liked the idea of the granny being the bully something you don’t see too often. As a short I thought it worked and enjoyed the read.

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