Comments on: THE WIZARD’S WALK • by Robert Goffeney http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Thu, 29 Jul 2010 20:25:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Don http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-19102 Don Mon, 02 Nov 2009 16:49:25 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-19102 5* from me. for the title, how about The Waiverly Liver 5* from me.
for the title, how about
The Waiverly Liver

]]> By: Rachel http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10325 Rachel Tue, 09 Dec 2008 05:27:27 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10325 I loved the story and the ending. But what I'm thinking is the title doesn't fit what the story is really "about." I give it a five though. Awesome. I loved the story and the ending. But what I’m thinking is the title doesn’t fit what the story is really “about.” I give it a five though. Awesome.

]]> By: Lindsay http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10309 Lindsay Mon, 08 Dec 2008 04:26:41 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10309 This is such a cute story! This is such a cute story!

]]> By: Robert Goffeney http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10280 Robert Goffeney Sat, 06 Dec 2008 12:30:01 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10280 Thanks to everyone for your kind words. Rita, the idea came from a Writer's Digest prompt: a character finds something unexpected on his dining-room table. The working title for the piece has always been, in my mind, "850 words in search of a punchline." Thanks to everyone for your kind words. Rita, the idea came from a Writer’s Digest prompt: a character finds something unexpected on his dining-room table. The working title for the piece has always been, in my mind, “850 words in search of a punchline.”

]]> By: Margie Lott-Chapman http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10278 Margie Lott-Chapman Sat, 06 Dec 2008 08:12:33 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10278 Wonderful! A 5-star Read! Wonderful!

A 5-star Read!

]]> By: TW http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10276 TW Fri, 05 Dec 2008 20:43:59 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10276 Very clever! A nice, light read ... I can see where the alliteration might vex some, but it was right up my alley. Very clever! A nice, light read … I can see where the alliteration might vex some, but it was right up my alley.

]]> By: Mark Dalligan http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10275 Mark Dalligan Fri, 05 Dec 2008 19:59:16 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10275 Liked this a lot. A really fine tale. Offaly good ...sorry, couldn't resist that. A 5 from me as well. Cheers Mark Liked this a lot. A really fine tale. Offaly good …sorry, couldn’t resist that. A 5 from me as well.

Cheers

Mark

]]> By: Sylvia http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10273 Sylvia Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:06:31 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10273 Haha, this is wonderful. I loved it. Haha, this is wonderful. I loved it.

]]> By: Erin http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10272 Erin Fri, 05 Dec 2008 15:34:39 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10272 I'm glad it worked out happily for the pour wizard. Your descriptions of the environment set a great atmosphere for the emotions in this story. I’m glad it worked out happily for the pour wizard. Your descriptions of the environment set a great atmosphere for the emotions in this story.

]]> By: Jen http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-walk-by-robert-goffeney/comment-page-1/#comment-10270 Jen Fri, 05 Dec 2008 14:35:58 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-wizards-by-robert-goffeney/#comment-10270 Aww, that ending was so *sweet.* I wasn't expecting that. :) Aww, that ending was so *sweet.* I wasn’t expecting that. :)

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