Comments on: WAITING • by Peter Rowney

By: irving

irving — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 22:37:21 +0000

very good story graps and keeps your attention but too short it leaves you wondering what happenend all in all it was very good

By: Steven Smethurst

Steven Smethurst — Tue, 29 Jan 2008 08:37:49 +0000

Enjoyable,
It was a little long, but the ending was not lost on me.
Good story.

By: Martin

Martin — Mon, 28 Jan 2008 04:42:07 +0000

Very nice first line: “The last train to anywhere was gone.”

By: Jason

Jason — Sun, 27 Jan 2008 16:13:40 +0000

Excellent, Peter – and further evidence this EDF-thing Jordan et al have created has good things going for it. Granted, all comments here are on finished (as in published) works, but if delivered with the right intentions, ultimately helpful to far more than just the author. I hope.