Comments on: WASPISH • by Melissa A. Bartell http://www.everydayfiction.com/waspish-by-melissa-a-bartell/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Sat, 13 Mar 2010 21:49:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: hmfoster http://www.everydayfiction.com/waspish-by-melissa-a-bartell/comment-page-1/#comment-7545 hmfoster Sat, 26 Jul 2008 18:02:12 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=322#comment-7545 terrific Melisse I don't see the futility of the relationship at all; the continuous railing against it(the situation) only encases one, trapped like the wasp. terrific Melisse
I don’t see the futility of the relationship at all; the continuous railing against it(the situation) only encases one, trapped like the wasp.

]]> By: Misanthrope http://www.everydayfiction.com/waspish-by-melissa-a-bartell/comment-page-1/#comment-6299 Misanthrope Tue, 24 Jun 2008 03:56:14 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=322#comment-6299 Miss ! I am enchanted by the vivid description, depth of characters and the gloomy feeling it tend to give.. Feels like some old back and white movie running with Beethoven's saddest symphony.. Miss !

I am enchanted by the vivid description, depth of characters and the gloomy feeling it tend to give.. Feels like some old back and white movie running with Beethoven’s saddest symphony..

]]> By: Hasmita http://www.everydayfiction.com/waspish-by-melissa-a-bartell/comment-page-1/#comment-5493 Hasmita Sat, 24 May 2008 06:35:57 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=322#comment-5493 This was Beautiful, Melissa, I completely understood her feelings and her situation because mine is similar. And I expected that after he left she would free the wasp and leave him. Instead you made her tiredly make up with him, and killed the wasp. So well done, and unexpected that it gave me goosebumps. Real and all the more powerful for it. This was Beautiful, Melissa, I completely understood her feelings and her situation because mine is similar. And I expected that after he left she would free the wasp and leave him. Instead you made her tiredly make up with him, and killed the wasp. So well done, and unexpected that it gave me goosebumps. Real and all the more powerful for it.

]]> By: jennifer walmsley http://www.everydayfiction.com/waspish-by-melissa-a-bartell/comment-page-1/#comment-5402 jennifer walmsley Mon, 19 May 2008 08:11:58 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=322#comment-5402 Good story on a relationship. The wasp, as others have said, an excellent counterpoint. Content she may be, but will it last? I doubt it. Jennifer Good story on a relationship. The wasp, as others have said, an excellent counterpoint. Content she may be, but will it last? I doubt it.

Jennifer

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