Comments on: WEIGHTLESS • by Fred Warren http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Sat, 20 Mar 2010 12:10:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Rodello http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/comment-page-1/#comment-18009 Rodello Thu, 24 Sep 2009 13:35:34 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/#comment-18009 I thought the ending was the perfect touch, but of course humor is subjective. Well done! :D I thought the ending was the perfect touch, but of course humor is subjective. Well done! :D

]]> By: Fred Warren http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/comment-page-1/#comment-17872 Fred Warren Wed, 16 Sep 2009 21:41:05 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/#comment-17872 Thanks to everyone who commented for your thoughtful remarks and helpful feedback. To misquote Frank Herbert, "Endings are delicate times." Thanks to everyone who commented for your thoughtful remarks and helpful feedback. To misquote Frank Herbert, “Endings are delicate times.”

]]> By: Lyn http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/comment-page-1/#comment-17868 Lyn Wed, 16 Sep 2009 18:20:10 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/#comment-17868 I'm somewhat partial to the O. Henry ending myself, so thought it cute. Plus, I sort of know where Fred is going on occasion as I published his "A Quiet Afternoon at the Alabaster County Ladies’ Sewing Circle and Patchwork Society" awhile back. lol. Congrats on this one in EDF. I’m somewhat partial to the O. Henry ending myself, so thought it cute. Plus, I sort of know where Fred is going on occasion as I published his “A Quiet Afternoon at the Alabaster County Ladies’ Sewing Circle and Patchwork Society” awhile back. lol. Congrats on this one in EDF.

]]> By: J.C. Towler http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/comment-page-1/#comment-17834 J.C. Towler Tue, 15 Sep 2009 21:51:03 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/weightless-by-fred-warren/#comment-17834 Enjoyed this. The set-up--floating object--was quite interesting and I was curious where the story was going to take us. Yoshi's "take" on the ability was sort of a downer...what a ninny. Interesting resolution. --John Enjoyed this. The set-up–floating object–was quite interesting and I was curious where the story was going to take us. Yoshi’s “take” on the ability was sort of a downer…what a ninny. Interesting resolution.

–John

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