Comments on: WHEN SHE COMES TO IT • by Jennifer Tatroe http://www.everydayfiction.com/when-she-comes-to-it-by-jennifer-tatroe/ The once a day flash fiction magazine. Fri, 19 Mar 2010 23:52:52 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: jennifer walmsley http://www.everydayfiction.com/when-she-comes-to-it-by-jennifer-tatroe/comment-page-1/#comment-6700 jennifer walmsley Sun, 29 Jun 2008 05:53:09 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=356#comment-6700 A lovely story. The ending was as it should be, your MC had grown after leaving for a year. It's the beauty of your words that drew me along. Anita Shreve is another author who does that for me. I'm giving it 5. Jennifer A lovely story. The ending was as it should be, your MC had grown after leaving for a year. It’s the beauty of your words that drew me along. Anita Shreve is another author who does that for me.
I’m giving it 5.

Jennifer

]]> By: Stephen Book http://www.everydayfiction.com/when-she-comes-to-it-by-jennifer-tatroe/comment-page-1/#comment-6072 Stephen Book Mon, 16 Jun 2008 13:52:23 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=356#comment-6072 I liked the way you left it up to the reader to fill in the blanks on Hannah's response. Giving too many details can spoil the magic, and I think you've given just enough to hold your readers under your spell. Good job. I liked the way you left it up to the reader to fill in the blanks on Hannah’s response. Giving too many details can spoil the magic, and I think you’ve given just enough to hold your readers under your spell. Good job.

]]> By: TonyB http://www.everydayfiction.com/when-she-comes-to-it-by-jennifer-tatroe/comment-page-1/#comment-6061 TonyB Mon, 16 Jun 2008 07:59:16 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=356#comment-6061 Jennifer - Wonderfull Don't stop you have a voice that should and will be heard. Yes I saw the ending from the very first line... but isn't the how and the why the whole point sometimes? Jennifer – Wonderfull

Don’t stop you have a voice that should and will be heard. Yes I saw the ending from the very first line… but isn’t the how and the why the whole point sometimes?

]]> By: Avis Hickman-Gibb http://www.everydayfiction.com/when-she-comes-to-it-by-jennifer-tatroe/comment-page-1/#comment-6044 Avis Hickman-Gibb Sun, 15 Jun 2008 00:09:11 +0000 http://www.everydayfiction.com/?p=356#comment-6044 I thought the ending spot on. Nicely understated, and surprisingly true to life. A really, really good flash. I thought the ending spot on. Nicely understated, and surprisingly true to life. A really, really good flash.

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